Roots of earthby =zardo

Photography / Animals, Plants & Nature / Waterscapes

Photograph taken in France / Jura with the canon eos 5D Mark II + canon 24-105L + hoya ND400 + tripod manfrotto 190 XPROB.

Copyright © Behrouz Riahi, allias Zardo. All rights reserved. My images may not be reproduced or used in any form without my written permission.

Critique by ~Rom3o Nov 13, 2009, 1:34:21 AM

Its always a pleasure to see something different from any artist and this is no exception.

Really well composed image and im a big fan of the vignette.

Subject choice is great and i love the roots in the foreground, nice and sharp and interesting without being to busy.

Unfortunately things fell of when i looked up, the over exposed water which is now just a giant white smudge overpowers the image with its unnatural glow and lack of detail.

The heavy blacks or underexposed dark patches are also fairly disappointing and coupled with the extreme bracket blur and softness throughout the top half of the image leave a lot to be desired.

Just seems like such basic technical non artistic errors someone with your experience shouldn't make or be satisfied with.

What do you think?

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